Reviews for Takopi's Original Sin

Takopii no Genzai, or Takopii's Original Sin, explores the human psyche through the lens of pure innocence and naivete. How do you explain suffering, loss, emotional, psychological and physical abuse to someone who knows nothing of the human condition? This manga goes to very dark places as a cute little alien with strange powers named Takopii tries relentlessly to help and understand humans in the only way he can, with no understanding of just how his well-meaning charity could be twisted and taken advantage of. This manga exploded in popularity in Japan, and could have easily dragged on for years, but the author chose to endit on their own terms, and I have a lot of respect for that. For how dreary and depressing it can be, the ending is satisfying. You can easily read this in a single sitting and enjoy it for what it is. It gets slightly convoluted near the end, but gets its point across with brevity and conciseness.

For everything that could have gone wrong with Takopii, it gets a lot right by having an uncompromising vision. If this is an indication of the talent of this mangaka, I think we have a lot to look forward to, as this is their first published work. I would recommend this short read to anyone, and give it a solid 8/10.

Takopii no Genzai does not pretend that it is able to provide the grand solution to social and family problems; nor does it try to sell the bloody hell till the end. It only solves one conflict: the misunderstandings between children. And that is already what the kids need… perhaps? As the title suggest, Takopii no Genzai is a story about Takopii, and how its purely kind actions turns out to actually worsen the already fucked up situations that the MCs face: domestic violence, school bullying, academic and family pressure, etc. What makes this manga stand out (and become the #1 trend in Japan) is its thrillers:how really bad the children’s living conditions were. But the one thing that makes this manga shine is its brilliant use of art and storyboard. It not only guides the readers’ emotions through the story, but also provides hints and references that link different part of the story together. For example, in chapter 1, when Takopii went to Shizuka’s home to look for Shizuka, the author draws a full page of Shizuka and her home detailedly with Takopii staying in the tiny bottom-right position. This similar storyboard later appears in another chapter, showing another home’s condition, which (IMO) accuses Takopii for the similar results. Another example is the visual effect of something getting hit in the corner.

So why don’t I rate it a 10/10 must watch?

It’s because of the story, mainly the end of it.

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I understand that nobody, including me, wants to see a story which ends with two or three kids killing each other like a psychopath. Yet that doesn’t solidify how the good end can arrive with just one outsider’s sacrifice. More precisely, I don’t think the author explains well enough how Takopii’s final act solely can guide the MCs to face their mental knot, reconcile with each other, and grow with each other’s support. Besides, this good end is in fact very fragile, especially consider how Marina family is still a mess (note that Marina still got her scar when she grows up).

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But that doesn’t mean the story is awful or anything. The journey that I went through with Takopii is still astonishing (though mentally burdening), and I wish more people can get on this ride. Just keep in mind that this is not an antisocial manga.

Characters. While the MCs are all mentally distorted, once I keep in mind that the they are still children, I find it hard to completely dislike every one of them. They are just a tragic result of irresponsible dads and maniac moms. The kids just follow their heart and go with their own will.

I think I have written long enough for a full review, consider how the end of this manga is very short, compared to its elaboration.

And the manga is also short, so I suggest you to read it yourself and see if it fits your taste.

This is a manga with a pretty solid premise, and a lot of moments that are, in isolation, quite well-crafted, but overall kind of fails to develop its story interestingly or create any real weight in the story. The biggest issue with this manga is the extremely heavy-handed short-term foreshadowing. Without fail, before some big event happens the mangaka will make sure to spend multiple pages beating you over the head with what's coming. As an example, there is one particular double-page spread in chapter 1, clearly written to be the biggest dramatic moment of the chapter (and could have been a great one) that isundermined by the fact that instead of a gut-wrenching moment of "whoa, of course this was going to happen, but also wow" it's more like "yeah yeah everyone knows what's going to happen so let's just get it over with and move on with the story". This happens constantly, and really prevents the story from carrying the intended emotional weight.

Artwise, it's pretty good overall - nothing super special, but it has distinctive character art that works pretty well for the intended tone. It kind of devolves as it goes on though, starting out pretty competent but becoming increasingly poor near the end of the manga.

Aside from that, the pacing is good at the beginning but becomes weaker as it goes on. The character writing is fine, but a little shallow - the characters have a tendency to lack anything more than their rough outlines. I could critique the dialogue - there is a strong tendency for child characters to speak like caricatures of worldly adults, almost to the point of parody - but it is also entirely possible that this is a translation artifact, so I will not judge the manga on this basis.

Despite my issues with it, I think the manga was a worthwhile read, because failing in interesting ways is far superior to just being generically dull. I'll definitely be keeping an eye on the mangaka, because they are really just a few problems away from being excellent - I am reminded of Yukimura, for whom I rated Planetes a 5/10 as well but loved Vinland Saga.

The hottest manga in Japan in January 2022 (a country like Nard's cave). Takopii no Genzai (The Original Sin of Takopii) A nightmarish synthesis of STEINS;GATE, Doraemon, and ruthless reality that has become a topic of conversation among cutting-edge nerds on twitter. Why do nerds read manga? The reason is simple: to escape the harsh reality. For children who have had a bad childhood, or who are currently experiencing a harsh reality, they need a means of escaping reality such as manga. So what if the fiction depicted in the manga is the harsh reality of the child itself? Except for the pop-art alien named Takopii, the characters in this manga liveon the edge of reality.

Bullying, family breakdown, and torture in the name of parental education.

If you are only looking for entertainment in manga, this is not for you.

It's just a hard manga.

I'm sure it will soon be available in a translated version and give English-speaking otaku hell.

Here's a link to Jump+.

https://shonenjumpplus.com/episode/3269754496638370192

I really randomly found this manga and it definitely was a memorable one. On the surface it looks really simple and short having only 16 chapters but it actually has a multi layered and complex story involving abuse, bullying and death. I will definitely say that when I started reading this, I had thought that things will turn out the usual way but I was pleasantly surprised when it actually exceeded my expectations. Any work involving time travel has the chance to be either a hit or miss and it's really easy to mess it up but Takopi's Original sin is one which perfectly concludes its ownpremise within the short amount of chapters.

This could have easily been dragged out but the author chose to finish it rather quickly and wrapped it up in a nice package.

The art is weirdly beautiful too, like its not the best obviously but it has a charm to it.

Just the fact that this manga compelled me to write a review speaks about the quality showcased here.

I'll recommend this to anyone who likes dark stuff or stories with melancholic vibes.

The cherry on the top is the manga's message, Its simple and clear cut but actually really powerful and one we often forget while indulging in our day-to-day lives.

This was definitely one of the better short manga I've read. Deserves the rating it has 100%.

Thanks for reading!

At first , this anime seems very childish, but you quickly realize that it's actually about suffering. You become attached to all the characters (except the adults, who are horrible). I cried from beginning to end. If you want to have a good time, run away. This manga tackles tough topics such as bullying, abuse, and manipulation. It quickly becomes clear that every bad thing the children do is simply a consequence of the adults around them. Takopi may seem stupid and annoying, but to me he represents innocence and ignorance. The ending of the work brought me to tears. I highly recommend this work, which hada profound impact on me.

This work squeezed my heart, it has destroyed me, just by saying that I had not even half of the first volume and I was already crying. I will never forget this story, every time I think about it I get a lump in my throat, it has become one of my favorite mangas. This story hurts a lot, but it makes you reflect, and above all, it teaches you to value what you have. I think it's not a story for everyone, the "sensitive content" label says it all, it's a painful, cruel story full of longing for hope, that is, realistic. Here you will seethe most ruthless side of the human being. Why is the human being like this? Earth is a cruel place.

It touches on real issues, which, although it may seem unbelievable due to so much cruelty, happens to many people every day, and in this case, to many boys and girls who have to carry the weight that their parents should carry, without being able to enjoy their childhood. . Bullying, abuse, family violence, loss of innocence... Human beings are despicable.

The innocent Takopi has completely won my heart, he is undoubtedly a being of light, a pure being that isn´t corrupted by the darkness of the human being. He came to Earth with the purpose of spreading happiness, with his gadgets, Takopi just wants to save smiles.

It has a good character development, being able to see the story from the perspective of each one of them. With the development of the story we can see the cruel reality of each character.

I really liked the drawing, it is full of feelings and perfectly conveys that pain, that cruelty, those feelings that will make you have a knot in your stomach.

We can only save ourselves by speaking from the heart and empathy.

Please read this manga.

Pi!...

Octopi are a curious and fascinating species. Out of all the animals residing on planet Earth, they are probably the closest to extra-terrestrials. Many documentaries such as “My Octopus Teacher” have brought awareness to these creatures to show that they are in fact, smarter than we give them credit for. These cephalopods are capable of displaying a wide array of cognitive abilities ranging from being able to solve mathematical problems to even using their limbs to fashion makeshift tools out of coconut shells. Don’t be surprised if in the future, humanity’s downfall could end up at the hands of these creatures. Octopi Skynet is closerthan we think, people! Be warned!

But enough of this biology lesson. Anyways, this manga really does capitalize on the otherworldly-ness of octopi. Here the octopus is an alien lifeform from the planet known as “Happy Planet” and is imbued with a gift that allows it to cure the sadness and despair of other individuals and disperse happiness across the globe. Upon arrival, the alien – or Takopii in this case – winds up being targeted by the authorities and narrowly escapes their devious clutches. It is then that Takopii comes across a child named Shizuka wallowing in her own despair. Being inherently kind hearted, humble, and good natured, it aspires to help the child and the two strike an odd friendship. It all seems to go just right for the two until things take a turn for the worst.

The premise sounds like a light-hearted romp, kind of like something out of a whimsical comic strip like all those “Doraemon” comics I’ve been accustomed to reading when I was a wee little lad. For a more modern analogy, think the Isobayan segments from Inio Asano’s “Dead Dead Demon’s Dededede Destruction”, where an otherworldly creature comes to comfort a lonely child and help them find their footing in life while hilarious and wacky hijinks ensue. The connections to that and “Doraemon” hit even closer to home as Takopii even attempts to gift the child various different gadgets, including one very familiar one that will enable them to fly freely in the sky. But whimsical this manga is not. In fact, it’s a very raw and depressing look into how children cope with abuse and trauma, from both their parents and their classmates from school. The cover of the first volume – a close up of a crying child – is a huge giveaway of what the manga is actually like. However, what I was not expecting, was it to tackle darker subject matter such as child abuse and abandonment.

Takopi’s Ambition is kind of similar to manga such as ~Erased.” It uses the template of a coming-of-age story into almost deluding the audience into thinking it would be just that, only to reveal some disturbing and ominous imagery buried beneath the narrative. There are depictions of child abuse and murder that would not look out of place in your average seinen manga. Let me warn my fellow viewers about this: this is not a manga for children. There’s imagery in here that is not for the faint of heart.

Takopii itself is a creature brimming with curiosity; it knows nothing about humans and human nature in general, and wants nothing more than to learn more about them as a species. It also has a goal of spreading happiness across the worlds it visits and offers its gadgets as means to aid others. It’s an innocent creature that’s pure and selfless with none of the flaws and volatile emotions that human beings possess. This is what makes it different from other similar characters of its kind. Whereas Isobayan acts like your teacher and Doraemon acts more like a best friend, Takopii feels like a little sister who’s constantly questioning the wide world around her. And no matter how much it fails at doing its job, it will never stop at anything to bring joy to the world. In spite of this, its bounded by a set of rules, and in its desperate attempt to help the poor child, it breaks many of those rules.

The best thing about the characterization in this piece is that no one is presented as being nothing but pure evil. It seems to be a common trope in anime and manga, where the abuser or the bully just torments others just for the sake of it. However, the manga highlights that even the tormentors have shades of grey to them. Marina for instance, viciously bullies Shizuka on a chronic level everyday she heads to school. But it’s also revealed, that she is a victim of her mother’s abusive behaviour towards her, and she merely takes out her anger on Shizuka because Marina’s father cheated on her mother and found himself infatuated with Shizuka’s mother instead. As a result, she blames Shizuka for all her troubles even though she’s completely innocent in this regard. As someone who’s tired of over-the-top bullies in anime/manga, it’s refreshing to see one that isn’t completely one-dimensional or a stereotype. There’s also another character that ends up being introduced – Azuma. He finds himself attracted to Shizuka due to her resemblance to his mother and whom also harbours his fair share of troubles, albeit less traumatic compared to the other two. He is constantly living in his brother’s shadow and his mother constantly bribes him in an attempt to have him earn the best grades possible. Even a score of 95/100 isn’t satisfactory to her; its either full marks or he loses some provisions. This isn’t unheard of in Asian countries as a lot of parent’s desire for their child to get the best grades possible so they can either work as doctors or engineers in the future and secure a comfortable, rich livelihood. While these are good scenarios for your main characters that present a conflict and give you a reason to care for their predicament, the characterization is fairly weak.

The characters jump straight to the worst possible conclusions when it comes to handling their own situations. Every resolution just seems to involve murder for some reason. Without spoiling much, there’s a really messed up scene early on involving a murder and a character views it as a blessing upon the earth. This character is one the audience is supposed to be rooting for. There’s no shock or revulsion regarding the event, just nothing more than joy. And then the body is just dumped there in the woods to be forgotten about. It just feels so out of place that I could have sworn it was a parody or something.

The amount of deus ex machinas is also problematic. Oh no, someone just committed suicide, here’s let me whip out a gadget that would help resolve that issue. Whoops, I just made some middle schooler go on a rampage. Oh no whatever shall I do – aha I have a gadget that can reverse time. My dog just died? No problemo! I’ll just get out my nifty little – hey, that’s weird, the gadgets a little dented the last time I used it. Nevermind, here’s a magical solution to fix all of that! The manga also introduces one of my most hated and one of the most overdone tropes in all of anime/manga: time resets. Apparently, there is a device that can wind back time. Well, there goes any sort of tension. Who cares about these characters when a time reset can occur and they can be brought back to life and everything can be resolved with a single push of a button? Seriously, what is it with manga and time resets/travel/loops anyways? Its like these writers either are obsessed with this concept or are worried they’d end up killing too many characters or something.

The second half of the manga is a mess. I don’t know if its because the mangaka was under threat of cancellation, had to rush to meet deadlines, or just had no clue how to end it, but it just ended up getting worse page after page. We get certain questions popping up, but barely any answers to satiate our curiosity. We get a short glimpse of the alien’s home world, but barely any sort of exploration into what its society is like and so on. There is one moment towards the end where during a tension-filled event, the manga then just decides to include a “what if” scenario in the middle of it. It comes right out of nowhere, without any rhyme or reason. It disrupts the flow of the manga to yet again to expose our poor octopus friend to more trauma and hopelessness. All for the sake of more emotion turmoil and forced shock value. All of this culminates in what is essentially an ending that feels contrived and hastened.

There are a lot of issues this manga tackles. Bullying, abuse, bribery, suicide, companionship, trying to meet the demanding and high expectations of your parents. All these are relevant to today’s climate and are issues many people would have faced on a daily basis. These would be great topics to dive deep into… in a better manga that is. Takopii only touches upon these very superficially, never going into detail about any of it. It feels like window dressing and what we end up getting is only a surface level exploration of these issues.

It’s just a shame that the manga ends in 16 chapters. By the end of it all, I felt like there could be a lot more. The last stretch of the manga feels rushed as if the mangaka is trying desperately to tie up loose ends and finish everything in a hurry. This manga was serialized in a shonen jump magazine and it almost felt like it was under threat of cancellation because very rarely do you get manga that run for such short a length. Sure, we had “Red Hood,” but that got axed by the committee. This one didn’t. I did feel like it should have run on for much longer than what we got.

The art is also awkward to say the least. Its presented almost as if its some kind of children’s colouring book with rough sketches and outlines. It doesn’t look ugly, but it doesn’t offer anything of beauty to the human eye. It’s kind of like Hajime Isayama’s initial drawings for “Attack on Titan” - very unkept and rudimentary. That being said, the mangaka does a decent enough job at capturing the expressiveness of the characters. It’s clear whenever characters are tearing up or trouncing about in a fit of rage, he goes all out with visually depicting the emotions as vividly as possible.

For its length, Takopii no Genzai is a manga you could finish in literally a day – no, make that a couple of hours in fact. For that alone, it’s worth reading. Unfortunately, its rushed pacing along with the superficial approach to its themes really bogs this down to yet another standard, emotionally manipulative tearjerker with a plethora of plot conveniences and magical resolutions. Had it been much longer and tried to focus more on what mattered, it would have been an unforgettable romp. By the end, I was just indifferent. Indifferent to all the crying, to all the attempts to emotionally manipulate me, to all the constants moments of sheer shock value. Make of it as you will.

(TLDR at the bottom) Well, it's not every day I come across something as much of a rollercoaster as this. This is coming from someone who doesn't express themselves too much as well. Takopi's Original Sin lies within the start of the manga, otherwise, it is all pretty good for the most part. I don't know too much about how unique the idea is, but I would imagine that coping with depression and loneliness is not something I think is unique in this medium. The way it is gone around in this manga, however, is probably something to take more to heart. Maybe not all the literalorigins which build up everything, but instead, the plot progression and all the wild (and I do mean wild) turns that take place. It's a manga that has fully utilised its premise and created a story that isn't too dependent on being depressing for the sake of it, it also doesn't go into melodrama territory, which seems to be easy to fall into these days.

Alright but I need to actually speak about the start of the manga. It is very problematic and would have been the reason to give this manga a 1/10 if it kept going the way it did. I don't want to dive too much into it, the manga is at its most powerful when I don't go into spoilers (explicitly) but basically, everything seems to be really cheated in place as a means to drive on the story, and I do mean a repugnant exude of cheating, unfortunately, left for readers to process for some "story", but it's all cool and more so just jumping the gun. Despite absurd and lackadaisical startup, everything takes care of itself which ultimately does improve the circumstances of the manga once it gets rolling into the real content—it improves just a teeny tiny bit though.

The main thing to take with this manga is how powerful it can get with the ideas it plays with. It brings out a whole lot of messages about what is right and wrong, the battles people deal with on the inside, and the relationships between the things we love. It's all executed in a way that doesn't come across as eye-rolling, but rather, as a genuine expression that would very much what is said and done in this manga. It's very easy to take a touchy concept like this and bastardise it in ways that would make it become insufferable, whether it be due to a lack of real understanding of said topics, or inconsistency in characters that would create an unbelievable world enough so that it would be impossible to immerse or take seriously. This just isn't the case with Takopi's Original Sin. I don't have a ton of experience in psychology or anything similar, so I can only go off on what I understand (aided with logical reasoning) but I would love to believe that the story is not entirely off the mark in creating a believable premise with characters that are true to their motives.

Speaking of characters, I liked reading everything about them. Each character held some relevance to something in some way—whether that was the idea attached to them or just being a person in general. From how to deal with particular scenarios to the meaning of life, all of it. Simply amazing. I will start with Takopi, the main guy. He's naive, but that's a given when you get to know his origins (being a space alien often means you can't resonate with humans well). Honestly, if you are not patient, he may come across as very annoying. You may even be very close as I was into dropping the manga, but as stated before, give it some time. His lack of understanding actually works really well. You know, his journey means that he can understand human beings more in a variety of ways. Whether that be correcting tone-deaf actions or correcting the misguided actions of others. It's nice to see the little space dude grow, but also maintain what it was that made him, him. Being the friendly Happian with a mission to make Shizuka happy. This leads me nicely to my next character to speak of, Shizuka. If it is not already obvious from the first few pages, she is the extremely depressed girl who seemingly cannot hope to be happy for anything that isn't something she hasn't already established a relationship with. Her life is hard, and that is probably an understatement. Many things in her life have gone terribly wrong and it is easy to sympathise with her given her circumstances. I love how she progresses as a character, and whilst I am in no position to call for how legit it is that someone similar to her would progress in life as she has (given that the events that occurred here were to replicate in real-life hypothetically), I still believe that she is an honest character, albeit, maybe a few possible extremes to her behaviour, which I will not name due to spoilers, but you will come across it and think to yourself something along the lines of "hey these children are pretty scary…". Still, for pretty much the entirety of the manga, her character and relevance to themes like the meaning of life is nothing short of generally very good.

Other side characters aren't exactly stereotypical "side" characters in my vision, they serve more as people who come in and out of the story, but not so much so that they constantly "just exist" on the sidelines. In other words, these people are important in their respective times they receive the spotlight. As is every other character here, they too are well written to a degree that respects their intended human behaviour. They both deal with internal issues well, but again, in ways that are slightly exaggerated, also won't speak too much of them due to spoilers. These characters I speak of are only just Azuma and Marina.

Thinking about it, the exaggeration of these characters can come across as something of a cheap trick to entice readers to release some emotion just because. I don't think that is entirely the case, but the few amplifications do add up. I don't believe that is inherently a bad thing, considering how this manga is true to its word, it is just vamped a little, but it can also be said that the reason it is a little more than it says is due to the powerful imagery, panels and technicalities which bring out the most of each and every moment.

I suppose I will dwell on the point a little more here. For some reason, this manga looks like something Asano Inio would draw. The style reminds me of something that came out of Goodnight Punpun or DDDD (from the few pages I've seen from both). It is ridiculously detailed character designs, with the occasional detailed background. Most of the attention is on character detail however and solidifying a mark on this style of art. It's all very good and something that catches your attention the moment you read it. Sometimes this manga utilises great shocks via page-turning. If I could describe it in some other way, I would mean that this manga is good at making powerful images with the occasional turn. It brings out more to these already evil surroundings, which is really nice in helping read some more about what this has to offer, or just becoming more absorbed into how bad this world can get. The art is just very respectable and clearly something that was thought out.

TLDR: Good story with an idea not too unique, but one that is taken and presented in a way that makes this story a grand one. Characters here are believable and people who play their roles to the utmost standard. As well as an art style that puts everything into place and magnifies everything towards the apex.

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When all is said and done, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this manga. I went and read the entire thing in a night, and managed to write something down in a relatively (and I mean that compared to the other stunts I've been pulling) reasonable time. I am not entirely sure exactly why I read this or how I found it, but I did get to the end of it and it is something of time well spent if I say so myself. SJ+ is always pulling out good stories to feast on so it is nice the quality has not deteriorated for what I know of its standing at this point in time. Anyways, I don't have a lot to speak of other than I would very much recommend this if you have an hour or 2 to spare. There's no downside in reading this if I do say so myself. It is just a good psychological drama. What more do you need? Aside from the fact that the first few chapters are something that requires a lot of patience, this is all good to go.

Takopii no Genzai had a really intriguing premise.It's a series that contains many problems that our society is facing constantly, such as domestic violence,bullying and kids being overpressured by their parents.There were many shocking scenes and fucked up situations.Unfortunately the ending felt kinda rushed ,I think the manga should have been a little longer like an extra volume or so. If it wasn't for that I would give it a solid 7 or even an 8 who knows. The art is pretty good ,I really enjoy the author's unique artstyle and the widespreads were fantastic. I extremely liked how the eyes were drawn, it is saidthat eyes are the gate of a human's soul and the mangaka managed to indicate that well enough.

The characters were good ,due to the situations they lived in no one is hateable ,their actions can be understanded.

Overall, Takopii no Genzai is a really nice short dark manga, it would have been way better given a little more time ,but it is what it is .It can be read in less than a day and I recommend it

It's like a lesser realized version of Goodnight Punpun. I do think Takopi's Original Sin has something going for it, especially in the beginning half. But I'm not a big fan of where it ended up going and the general idea that I was left with at the end of the story. It surely delivered a solid gut punch of a read (for the most part), but didn't leave me with much more. There were interesting ideas and concepts, and the main characters were all fascinating to a certain degree, but ultimately things felt unfinished and lacked a proper resolution. A resolution doesn't needto be happy, but justified within the framework of the fiction. I was just left confused and unsatisfied. I might read it again, but who knows.

I binge-read this a while ago, and I did not know what I was getting into. Takopii no Genzai, or Takopi´s Original Sin, follows the story of a squid-like creature who arrives on planet earth. He meets Kuze Shizuka, a girl who is relentlessly bullied by her classmate Kirarazaka Marina over different issues, which I am going to omit to leave this review spoiler-free. Takopi is an alien who does not gran sadness is, so he is unaware at first of what is wrong, or what causes, the issues between the two girls previously mentioned. But he is determined to spread happiness throughout the world andto solve the problems in Shizuka´s life to make her happy.

Overall, the plot revolves around a chain of reactions and how the actions of different characters can affect the lives of the people surrounding them, while also having a being who does not know what is happening nor what to say, or how to face them without using a positive mindset and hope.

I found it brilliant the way family problems were displayed throughout the story, and how they can affect the mentality and safety of kids if they don´t have someone they can rely on. I would dare to say that this manga shows how good actions and intentions are not enough to change a person's life.

The author did an amazing job with Takopii no Genzai; moreover, there is no wonder why it became a hit in Japan and was even awarded.

To conclude, this psychological short story about bullying, depression, innocence, a first-class plot twist, and a heart-wrenching yet beautiful ending, is a story well deserving of its recognition that can be read in a single day and can hurt for a lifetime.

Another bullying and abusing manga that reveals the true nature of humans when they get pushed to the edge , the story at some point didn't make any sense but after few chapters we got it and honestly I've no clue why the author tried to complicate it like that , well his plot twist didn't impact me that much for like I said we didn't get what's going on however this manga gives me mixed feelings like I hated all characters and I felt bad for em at same time , I guess the story not recommended to everyone it's a bit dark sogive it a chance when you feel you ready for it .

Takopii's Original Sin is a delightfully crude yet endearingly hopeful study on human empathy, and lack thereof. It cleverly blends whimsical, lighthearted fantastical elements typically seen in children manga with brutally mature themes and scenarios: it sometimes does feel like the most violent, darker elements are taken a little too far for the sake of shock value and spectacle, but for the most part the two halves manage to coexist harmoniously and complement each thanks to the story's emotional earnestness working as a strong connective tissue. The clashing of opposing themes also reflects the story's message: the clashing of people and their conflicts. Takopii's OriginalSin isn't a story with the presumption of having the solution to all social conflicts and understands their complexity, but advocates the importance of human comunication and mutual understanding with raw, heartwarming emotion. It is a beautiful message that didn't hit nearly as hard as it could have due to a plot that, as much as it starts extremely strong with engaging twists, gets progressively more and more sloppy with a confusing pacing and plotlines resolved hastily as the author rushes towards the finale. A finale that, because of it, loses much of its weight Even so, Takopii's Original Sin remains a pretty good experience worth checking out, thanks to a plesantly peculiar mood, an overall good plot and a sincerely conveyed wholesome message at its core.

Takopi's Original Sin is not a happy manga, that much is obvious from the cover. So, is it a sad manga, that will make you cry, ar an edgy funny one, that will make you laugh at all the bs? Well, as far as the first three chapters, released for free in mangaplus on 24th of February, go, this one seems to fall into the second type, although there's still some hope. So let's look closer at what we are dealing with here. Story: It's honestly relatively cliché, a being that doesn't understand bad emotions meets with a a very radical representation of them, and failsto comprehend them in its narrow view of reality. The one thing that makes it look slightly better, is the time travel, which changes the dynamic to more of a ReZero-esque type of work, but honestly, it just isn't enough to give it more than a 6

Art is probably the biggest highlight of the entire comic. It looks dirty, you can almost feel the terrible state everything is in. The only part which i could complain about are the faces, they sometimes look really sloppy, but you could account that as part of the style, overall an 8, it does its job well, but there isn't any point in reading this one purely for the art

Characters are relatively well written, but they aren't really that complex, at this pint in time i thin you should expect something more than "I'm this cliché, that does this bad thing, but i actually have a reason, which would be a twist but has been used so many times that it's just a cliché now". That said, there still is some room to grow in that department, so i hope it can stop being so edgy and grow into a really good story

That said, i enjoyed the time i had reading the first three chapters, i didn't make me laugh thinking "This makes no sense at all", and i have high hopes, so the enjoyment and overall scores are a solid 7 for me

Tokopi’s Original Sin is a visually striking manga, with a unique art style that not only stands out but also perfectly complements the story’s unsettling tone. Beneath its surreal premise lies a surprisingly grounded and resonant message about trauma, family, and the human condition something many readers will find emotionally impactful. One of the manga’s greatest strengths is its use of Tokopi, the alien protagonist, as an observer. His outsider perspective adds depth by revealing the layered perspectives of the three main characters, exposing both the beauty and darkness within their family dynamic. When the manga gets graphic, it does so with flair the explicitdepictions of violence and despair are executed with confidence and artistic skill, offering the kind of uncomfortable yet compelling experience that mirrors the early “misery porn” appeal of Shameless (US).

However, Tokopi’s biggest weakness lies in its brevity. At only 16 chapters, the story feels rushed, often leaning on cheap emotional shocks to keep momentum. This lack of narrative space undermines the manga’s more serious themes, resulting in moments that feel unearned or melodramatic. The rapid escalation of violence and tragedy while entertaining comes off as amateurish at times, especially when it skips over subtle character development. The story also struggles with foreshadowing; character flaws emerge suddenly and without buildup, such as the main character’s abrupt “switch up” which feels more like a twist than a natural progression. Perhaps most jarring is the portrayal of the 4th graders, whose absurdly calculated behavior (creating alibis, covering up serious incidents) breaks immersion and makes you question whether the author has ever interacted with, or even been, a child

Overall, Tokopi’s Original Sin is an intriguing and emotionally intense read, but it sacrifices depth for shock, and in doing so, undercuts the power of its own message.

Takopi's original sin or Takopii no Genzai a manga described as too Dark and too cute for a being a shounen manga Its a manga with bullying as its main theme and how an innocent creature who nothing about it sees it, A manga called to be too similar to Doraemon and Oyasumi Punpun which are totally different from each other and yet there ideas seem to blend too well together in the manga The mix of reality and fiction is done in a really impactful way in the manga, the line between realism and fiction is really thin a way not really seen in any manga,A piece which feels to not be enjoyed by a lot but would honestly be loved by those who stay with it

The first chapter of this had me unsettled for a quite a bit but also very intrigued for the future of the manga and the story

In the first chapter we meet the happiest alien who comes from the "Happy planet" in the entire universe whose life's purpose is to spread happiness and after he reaches Earth and meets a depressed child called shizuka who has no one other than her dog as a source of happiness he attempts his all to cheer her up. But it ain't easy to cheer up the tormented girl Shizuka who is badly mistreated by bullies at school. Even Though he tries his best he can't really do anything for her and his act of even giving her a tool to seemingly help her, results in a tragedy. The tragedy which was partially overshadowed, but it happening was still not very expected. the way takopii sees bullying which is tolerated in japan to the point of being encouraged is something of the essence of story

The end of the chapter 1 really reminded me of the chapter 139 of Oyasumi Punpun a chapter which really breaks a person but unlike oyasumi punpun the existence of takopii the cute alien who doesn't have a speck of negativity and is full of optimism still make you hold on and not really get depressed by the way story goes on. takopii's lack of understanding of human emotions and experiences really makes it a unique way to see the situation as the story is also meant to be seen from his point of view

The Art of great it can be called messy but the way it blends with background is dangerously great and overall pacing of the story is great too It is still too early to give an overall score but its 8.0+ for now for me

There is a saying "BROKEN CAN'T BE FIXED" and I do Hope this statement becomes false as the story progresses and eventually ends

Edit : After reading all the chapters of it I would say that The story really isn't at all that simple as I was expecting it to be even giving you an absolute mind fuck at times

Like how a seemingly act of kindness may have a different outlook to other ppl and how the social environment of a person affects their mental state and can even have them make rash and irrational decision

still its makes for a pretty good read and end is satisfying too if You infer it as such

I wanted it to be a little bit longer but it is what it is

Its 8 overall for me

I rated this a 7 but I think a 6.5/10 is more accurate. I liked the exploration of innocence and experience, naivete and trauma. I liked that each section had a clear stop and start point without it being too obvious so that jumping around from timeline to timeline didn't make the narrative too confusing or convoluted. It was also interesting watching the story explore the worst possible timeline, a middle ground, and the best possible timeline as well. It had a lot to say and I'm glad I read it. If you're looking for something thought provoking, don't mind triggers like domestic violence, suicide,and bullying, then you might also enjoy this manga. This is why I marked this review mixed feelings since I think it deals with topics some people might not want to read. It was a very fast read, easily accomplished in about an hour give or take.

My first review on this platform. Takopi’s Original Sin is a psychological manga about an alien who comes to Earth and tries to help children suffering from emotional trauma caused by neglectful or toxic parents. The story attempts to convey the message that humans are not inherently evil. However, the execution feels inconsistent—particularly in the way the adults are written. For instance, Marina’s father cheats on his wife without remorse, Shizuka’s father abandons his family entirely, and Azuma’s mother seems to lack any emotional connection or responsibility toward her son. These parental characters are portrayed as one-dimensional, without any real effort to explore their motives orhumanity. If the manga had delved deeper into these adults’ perspectives or given them more nuance, the overall message would’ve been far more compelling.

The conclusion also feels weak. Instead of resolving the core issues in a meaningful way, the story has Marina stop bullying Shizuka simply after looking at a drawing of Takopi and reminiscing about him. They suddenly become friends without any real emotional groundwork. Takopi’s sacrifice could have been much more impactful if the story had shown even small steps toward healing within each broken family. They didn’t need to be fully redeemed—just acknowledged in some way.

I enjoy short manga, and while this one is decently entertaining and carries an interesting theme, the ending felt unearned and unsatisfying.

6/10.

Doraemon but a hella more dark, that's probably the perfect way to describe Takopii's Original Sin. The manga revolves around a magical alien with special gadgets that lands on planet Earth, before meeting a young girl who is, well, let's just say she has a pretty rough life. It sounds eerily similar to that of Doraemon's premise, but it takes this concept and explores some really dark and depressing themes of suicide, bullying. inferiority complex and more. The plot flows really well, considering the fact that it only has 16 chapters. However it doesn't drag the story out and waste time on pointless moments; its snappy,thrilling story makes every chapter feel poignant and emotional. It does feel rushed at the end, but it's not too big of an issue personally.

The characters are also extremely well rounded. No one is presented as truly evil, or truly good. Takopi, the alien, is initially just a happy go lucky, sickeningly naiive creature, however as the chapters roll it's increasingly clear that Takopi isn't good; he just doesn't have a concept of good or evil, at least in the human sense. Shizuka is also a well done character; instead of being framed as an object of pity so that readers will root for her, the author shows her as a very human character. That being a human that has feelings of jealousy, of hatred, and of revenge. Other characters of note that shine very brightly despite the short span of the manga include the boy character, whose name eludes me at the moment, and the bully character, who serves as a believable foil and parallel to Shizuka's character.

The themes are also explored well for a 16 chapter manga. Violence and bullying will only beget more suffering, and the endless cycle will go on and on. The effects it has on people, especially children, is made extremely clear with its main three human characters, and it serves as a cautionary tale for parents to never ever treat their children in such a way, even though it might be understandable for them to do so. The final chapter of the manga presents an answer to the endless cycle of violence, and it's such a simple yet effective answer that it ultimately shows that this manga isn't a manga that is meant to simply shock you and horrify you. It is not mere despair porn. This is a manga meant to say something, and personally I think it worked.

The art is also impressive. The facial expressions are very expressive, which works wonders on the more emotional scenes, and the mangaka's ability to convincingly draw both light hearted and cute scenes and the more dark and harrowing moments is also worth commending. Some of the double page spreads do look wonderful.

Overall, give this a read. Looking at the MAL score, it's clear that not everyone seemed to love it, but I definitely did.